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Jakaleena
Senior Member
Registered: March 2002 Location: Mt. Vernon, Ohio Posts: 709
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I really love the golden tone in her face. Her dress and arms seem to be a bit different density/contrast from the rest of the image - perhaps just a selection of them and some adjustments might make them match more closely.
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Jak
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Tom Willis
Junior Member
Registered: June 2002 Location: Wakefield, Quebec, Canada
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Photo has a very rich feel to it - your choice of "warming" colour and soft focus, I suspect. Maybe the lips are a bit heavy - the eyes and skin look really good. Your solution to the perspective problem caught me off guard - it's looks just great.
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Doug Nelson
Janitor
Registered: August 2001 Posts: 6,301
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I'm so pleased someone finally tried fixing the perspective, but it looked so natural I didn't even notice until Tom's comment. Great job. I'd just try to match the arm/face tones (I think arms are ok, just lighten face a bit) (midtones and shadow, not highlights).
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Sanda
Senior Member
Registered: October 2001 Location: Sydney Australia Posts: 573
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Very nice. You've done a great job. I love your restoration of her face. well done
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farron
Junior Member
Registered: August 2001 Location: Nashville. TN Posts: 15
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Nice work!!! And great idea to deform and reshape the pole.
Now why didn't I think of that? LOL
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Farron
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Dennis Povey
Junior Member
Registered: February 2002 Location: nr Knutsford Cheshire England
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Your work on the background made a big difference and coupled with your excellent restoration of Tessa made a great piece of work
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Ed_L
Senior Member
Registered: August 2001 Location: northwest Indiana, about 45 minutes from Chicago, IL Posts: 2,824
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Very nice job. I also like the warm feel of the image. Excellent job on the lettering. That could make a difference to somebody. The darkened border also goes very well. I do think you cropped a little too much off the top, changing the composition. But that's only my opinion. Super job!
Ed
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DJ Dubovsky
Senior Member
Registered: August 2001 Location: Upper Penninsula of Michigan Posts: 1,659
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Straightening that pillar really makes a definate improvement to that picture. You did a fantastic job on this one. Keep up the good work.
DJ
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Mike Needham
Senior Member
Registered: April 2002 Posts: 489
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The darks are a bit dark, but a lovely idea about the pillar and the fisheye effect.
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