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Sharon
Junior Member
Registered: August 2001 Location: Everett, WA
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Beautiful job. Very real looking. The background adds to the realism of the picture.
Sharon
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katie
Junior Member
Registered: July 2002 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 17
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Very Nice. Only thing I would say is there is a bit of haze under the wrist area. This could be easily tidied using the eraser.
The bird is very pretty and sits nicely into the palm of the hand - well done.
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pstewart
Registered User
Registered: July 2002 Location: Chicago suburb Posts: 790
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The bird does fit beautifully into the hand, like it is really there. The only flaw I can see is the same flaw I had in my bunny-in-hand pic--the bird is more out of focus than the hand. The best way I have found this kind of problem is to sharpen the eye. Then the bird will seem to be in focus and the feathers can stay fluffy and smooth if you like, or, in this case, you could sharpen up the beak and feathers just a touch too.
Very nice job overall.
Phyllis
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G. Couch
Senior Member
Registered: January 2002 Location: Raleigh, NC Posts: 951
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Nicely done and great description! I like the overall color and the bird appears very natural in the hand...I do agree with Phyllis on the focus. That is really the only thing that bothers me...well done!
------------------------------ -Greg
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DJ Dubovsky
Senior Member
Registered: August 2001 Location: Upper Penninsula of Michigan Posts: 1,659
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Ellie,
Great job. Looks so realistic. Nice job of blending the bird with the hand. Love the blurred background for depth effect also. Excellent.
DJ
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MiniRtist2
Junior Member
Registered: August 2002
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I'm new to Retouch Pro, but I just wanted to say that this is a beautiful piece. Well done, and very artistic.
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tom c
Member
Registered: October 2001 Location: florida Posts: 64
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The bird and bg go well together....very nice piece.
tom c
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Scott Rudy
Junior Member
Registered: September 2002 Location: Ohio, USA Posts: 18
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I like how you used the birds wing to cover the area of the hand where the plant roots were. The birds tail is crisp and sharp but the sharpness fades toward the head, I sill think you did a great job.
------------------------------ Scott Rudy
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T Paul
Moderator
Registered: August 2001 Location: USA Posts: 2,921
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Well done! I like the new background as it isn't as distracting as the orignal. The bird does fit nicely into the hand, and the only thing I would change is to sharpen up the bird just a bit so it is as sharp as the hand. Great job!
~T
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ACTUAL iMAGE
Junior Member
Registered: September 2003 Location: Gurnee, IL Posts: 4
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Excellent depth creation. I think this is an art piece! Nicely done.
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The Pantone Menace
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