Hi, my firts post in this great board!

C&C is welcome!

http://martintnt.altervista.org/vip/vip.html

It's a 780 kb flash file, just wait and see the various steps.

Firstly, you're retouching an image that has already been retouched, so it doesnt really need any extra work.
The breast work was poorly done, you removed here hair and filled out the breast but left the shadow, leaving her very malformed.
You also left the blue reflections on her which empahsise the 'cutout' look. The finished image is bland, it certainly doesnt make me want to buy levis (especially since they're barely visible)

Firstly, you're retouching an image that has already been retouched, so it doesnt really need any extra work.
The breast work was poorly done, you removed here hair and filled out the breast but left the shadow, leaving her very malformed.
You also left the blue reflections on her which empahsise the 'cutout' look. The finished image is bland, it certainly doesnt make me want to buy levis (especially since they're barely visible)
I'm with Nancy.
Does JLo really look that unhealthy?