Cyber Cat
06-13-2006, 11:16 PM
please critique.
| View Full Version : critiques please Cyber Cat 06-13-2006, 11:16 PM please critique. Gary Richardson 06-14-2006, 01:10 AM Very dramatic, the house in the foreground could possibly do with knocking back a little, it's blown out on my monitor. I like the concept though, and house notwithstanding, the execution as well. blue dog 06-14-2006, 04:29 AM Very cool Cyber Cat. I agree with Gary that the right most building is blown-out on my monitor, but it may not in print. A couple of 'impressions'. (1) The saturation of the building colors is quite dramatic, but I feel that the sky is too ominous in a way that conflicts with the buildings. I think that it might be more effective with the sky less ominously gray and more pastel, perhaps one of those striking orange suns that happen now and again. (2) I would try for more more dramatic reflections in the water, probably the artificial flip, rotate, fade and distort variety (3) I would crop out the left-most building as its nothing but a blob of gray, (4) the bridge is not recognizable as such. Even at the expense of reality I would try and find a way to bring it back into visibility. All just opinions of course. I do like the overall effect and result. Nice one. blue dog 06-14-2006, 06:16 AM Please don't be offended, but I had to take a stab at it! That's one thing that's so unique about this place, this craft I guess, is that everybody is obsessed with trying it themselves. Its taken some getting use to, but now you see I am just like everyone else. :rolleyes: I'm not happy with the way the sky turned out, you'd really need to start with something closer to the end goal. I found the 'barber' poles (I've never been to Venice) on the left and decided to use them instead of recropping. Anyway, its just a quick attempt. It is your masterpiece to sweat over. Cyber Cat 06-14-2006, 12:34 PM Gary Richardson, blue dog thank you for the critique and pointers. so here is reworked image(somewhat) . to be honest ,i had some doubts about foreground building (came out too bright) so i just had to ask. p.s. i'm not offended ,im greatfull :nod: :) |