Comment welcome

Original
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/214/486741352_dc3146f889.jpg?v=0

After 6 hours
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/222/486740372_2c76f11be3.jpg?v=0

Metter... Great painting. I like it much more than the original which almost looks plastic to me. Good job.

A very good start... I especially like the emphasis on the eyes.

You might smudge the zipper a bit, the detail of which looks a bit out of place compared to the rest of your painting.

Welcome to the forum and thanks for sharing your before/after.
~Danny~

Thanks for the comments, yes I agree about the zipper, will fix that