View Full Version : my first what do you think


LetteRed
06-27-2007, 03:16 PM
i am new to this forum and this is my first real photo touch up. i am a graphic artist but dont really do much retouching. i am trying to break more into the market, tell me what you think and if you need to kill me just say it, jk well give you your opinion. it is a animated gif
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s265/backlit_photos/Test-Image.gif
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s265/backlit_photos/Test-Image.gif

Swampy
06-27-2007, 03:32 PM
Very nice, LetteRed. I like that you left her looking like a REAL woman. My only suggestion is to return the contour to her neck and chest area. It is very flat and almost "fake" looking. For example the highlight running down from her right shoulder has been obiliterated.

LetteRed
06-27-2007, 03:35 PM
thanks i will look at that

Mchilly
06-27-2007, 10:17 PM
Yeah the chest area looks flat but overall its okay :)

saby
06-28-2007, 12:27 AM
Nice work LetteRed, well done body and skin, any suggestion at her camera left brest: more shade gives her more rotundity

saby

LetteRed
06-28-2007, 11:53 AM
thanks for the input it really helps

zganie
06-28-2007, 06:43 PM
very nice work and as far as improving,well I think we could all do some improving.But overall really good


just my opinion zganie