about this, please...

There is something about the depth of focus that doesn't seem right. Her facial features are very sharp, but her left shoulder, which is actually closer to the camera, is soft focus. I'm not sure how to explain what it is, but like I said the facial features are sharp yet things in front of and behind those areas are too soft.

Otherwise, excellent work. Especially the eyes.

the skin and highlights is waaay better this time, but it needs more contrast and the eye is a bit blurry...is this 50mm lens or 85mm?


gerry

superkoax: 50/1.8

The edge between the blurred out skin and her non-blurred lips is really odd.
Same at her eyebrows.