I have created a very sweet portrait of a young girl caressing her little sister :blush: Take a look:

Original:
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2985/1nizd4p3iohqsu5vxvplxx1kg2.th.jpg (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1nizd4p3iohqsu5vxvplxx1kg2.jpg)

Edited:
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5327/mothersproudsf5.th.jpg (http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mothersproudsf5.jpg)

Mchilly, the crop is great, but the finished product has lost all color and detail. It's way blown out and weak.

I have created a very sweet portrait of a young girl caressing her little sister :blush: Take a look:

Original:
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2985/1nizd4p3iohqsu5vxvplxx1kg2.th.jpg (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1nizd4p3iohqsu5vxvplxx1kg2.jpg)

Edited:
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5327/mothersproudsf5.th.jpg (http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mothersproudsf5.jpg)Images too small to critique beyond "too light."

I really had a hard time posting images here :depressed

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/7240/1nizd4p3iohqsu5vxvplxx1pr7.jpg
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/2669/mothersproudgj4.jpg

Hope this kinda bigger now for you to critique :blush:

much better on the size.

i like the crop.

add a little more color to the faces. nice job on taking the red down on the baby. that one could probably be ok like you've got it now. but the older girl is really quite white and needs a bit of color. nice text work too.

Yes, perfect crop Mchilly!

Syd