(thats not the final titel!!! :))

just say what you think, what i can improve

http://thehyenasden.blogspot.com/2007/11/guitar-hero.html
(it's about the top most image)

Hi

my suggestion is set off the guitarist from background some more, anyway this is good composition I like it

That’s a great image! I really like the overall feel, but I definitely agree with saby.

I find my eye is drawn more towards the bright background, and the guitarist doesn’t stand out as well as he could. Just an idea, would adding a bit of blur to the background help?

I agree .. I like the image also!

How Bout a simple crop using the power of thirds

thx for all your comments.

i adjusted the contrast by brightening the background and not putting contrast anywhere else.
then i made a new mask for the axeman, changed the foodsteps, ad some vignette and kinda add some final polish.

about the "power of the third", my basic composition was based on the golden ratio and even tho i tried a new field of crop, i came back to my original composition

so thats the final one now: http://thehyenasden.blogspot.com/2007/11/guitar-hero.html

:)

Very subtle changes.. Tis a great looking picture,indeed!

personally, I prefer the dark blues as opposed to the aqua marines, but then I am old

Nice comp but the subject would be better off taking up more of the image there is too much sky in my opinion.

i nearlly finished my second art of this double feature

http://bp0.blogger.com/_RDI10ACbQc8/R1bguReDIaI/AAAAAAAAAIA/6JupnN1er_Y/s1600-h/guitarheroine01_prev.jpg

i know i still have to put some effort into the face but considering the really bad base-image i'm pretty happy with what came out :)

When doing work like this, rule number one is to match up lighting scenarios.

I mean, in the one with the chair especially, your shadowing is completely opposite of where the sun is in the sky.

Very nice, sub!