View Full Version : Nice Girls Glam retouch, what can I do? ecols 12-05-2007, 06:25 AM Hi there!
I'm chriss (call me ecols ;) ) and I'm pretty new to retouching. I shot this pic of a girl and was quite surprised to see what came out. I really think she IS good looking, but the photo doesn't at all show that..
So I wnated to ask the community to show me, what glam retouches they'd do! Can You show me Your results and explain what You did?
This is the original Pic:
http://ecols.de/images/retouch/first.jpg
And this is my first try:
http://ecols.de/images/retouch/first_retouch.jpg
What I did was: cleaning the skin with the "Copy Stamp" tool (green layer), slimming the cheeks, bit of makeup (just a brush),
the 2 color correction layers, one fir the background, one for the girl.
How do Your results look like?
I'm curious!
ecols jessibelle15 12-05-2007, 09:45 AM I did this super quick just to give you an idea of how I would approach it. I just slimmed her cheeks slightly and then enhanced her features. Made her eyes, brows and lips more prominent. Then gave her some cheek bones using curves. I took out some of the magenta in her skin tone, but kept her cheeks pink being that it looks pretty cool out. Lastly I just made the overall image less flat.
It's not a great retouch by any means, just meant to give a quick example of one way to glam it up a bit. 20 min
retouching
learning by doing! try and try and try .....
http://www.retouchpro.com/gallery/data/500/retusche_Kopie.jpg
lg Gary Richardson 12-05-2007, 12:04 PM I don't generally do retouch jobs on girls, so all I've really done is clean up the pic a little.
Removed obvious blemishes, opened up the pupils of her eyes by about 50%, opened up her mouth a touch (about 5%), and did a general colour correction.
Finally cropped a bit closer to minimise the BG a touch. ecols 12-05-2007, 01:02 PM Thank You guys!
You really inspired me.. I had a second go and didn't exagerate (I hope so).
I left the "rough" stuff like cheeks, lips, because I've got to do some tutorials to get those as natural as You do.
Tell me what You think, and keep on posting your versions! BillFrey 12-05-2007, 01:02 PM Some color adjustments and shading. I hope I didn't over do it. :)
Edit: added a lighter retouch DCobb 12-05-2007, 01:07 PM I just wanted to use this for a little practice.
dc edgework 12-05-2007, 01:56 PM Thought I'd try to imagine her with some shadows and contours in her face.
http://edgework.tripod.com/samples/first_retouched.jpg Hallo Ecols,
entweder dein Bildschirm ist schlecht eingestellt oder es fällt dir selber nicht auf das in deinem Bild zu viel Magenta (Rosa) ist
wenn du in Photoshop auf info gehts sollte der Magentaanteil nie höher sein als der Yellowanteil
Hautunreinheiten und andere Störungen auf der Haut werden mit dem Reparatur Werkzeug (nicht mit dem Clonestempel) entfernt
hoffe das hilft dir
Viel Spaß beim üben ;-)
lg
manuela
now in english
Hello Ecols,
maybe your srceen have not the right colours or you overlook that your Image have to much Magenta
If you go in Photoshop to Info the Magentacolour should not be higher than the yellow colour
for better results blemishes should be removed with the Healing Brush Tool
have fun by trying
Manuela ecols 12-05-2007, 02:10 PM Thanks a lot! I really had to recalibrate my screen!
I'll try that healing brush thing.. ;)
danke ;) ! keiser 12-05-2007, 02:39 PM Did this fairly quick
healing brush,
makeup
eyelashes
added hair
cropped and sharpened Alison 12-05-2007, 04:38 PM Hi ecols,
Quick effort from me. I would suggest that this isn't really the right environment or does the pretty young girl have the correct attire on to turn her into a glamour puss.
With that in mind, I cropped to make her the focus of attention and blurred out the background. This is in no way a finished image - used a levels adjustment layer, healing, cloning, high pass, gaussian blur, curves adjustment layer, lots of masking.
Just looked at the image ..... eek! .... it could do with some sharpening :-) Wolfman 12-05-2007, 08:37 PM I tried to keep it natural and real. grannysdc 12-05-2007, 11:25 PM Ran through Imagenomic portraiture filter
Replaced background
Cloned, Healed, history
Added Eyelashes, cheek color on new layers
Curves. slight sharpen Ayumi 12-06-2007, 09:18 AM Ok, my turn now. Sowwy for low quality.
p.s Sometimes you guys using too much make-up on poor natural girls :3 ^^ ecols 12-06-2007, 09:39 AM She really looks VERY young on some of Your pics.. I think I should have mentioned that she's 25 now ;) No, I'm not kidding.. ;)
Wolfman: I really like Yours.. It's a bit more mature ;) pixeltek 12-06-2007, 11:31 AM hey ecols...i had time at work so i thought i'd give this pic of your friend a try. she is really very beautiful! hope you like it...i tried to keep it natural. prizo 12-06-2007, 07:56 PM I think
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2186/2092666538_0cf00f3ea8_o.jpg One4UAll 12-06-2007, 09:12 PM To my mind, BillFrey's rendition is the best because it makes the photo a true portrait. That background has got to go! ArtC1 12-06-2007, 10:51 PM I gave her wavy hair too! :oD
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f99/Michelelcarpenter/first2.jpg ecols 12-07-2007, 10:52 AM Thanks everybody for Your work! You really inspired me ans posted really good results!
I'll do some more retouch excercises, tuts & stuff to improve. :happy: MartinBabies 12-07-2007, 01:44 PM Hmm, I gave it a shot. Could be a lot better but oh well.
What I did was "fixing" her cheeks, softening her (already soft) skin, removed some shadows in her face, added new shadows on the sides of her face, adding some highlights here and there, applying a little contrast and some more color. BillFrey 12-07-2007, 06:16 PM Thank you, One4UAll, your compliment is appreciated. :) Cassidy 12-08-2007, 05:17 AM Quite difficult on this one, not to end up with a painted look. Mining Art 12-08-2007, 09:01 PM I darken her skin slightly, added a red tint to her hair and highlighted her lips with the pink to match the coat trim. Brought out her blue eyes and cropped out to a taller picture. Out_Of_Focus 12-08-2007, 10:28 PM here my try at it went more natural looking just cleaned it up some klassylady25 12-08-2007, 10:44 PM Thanks for sharing. She was fun to work with. luqingcc 12-12-2007, 02:48 AM ?????????? luqingcc 12-12-2007, 02:51 AM hello, I am a chinese. Here's my quick try.
Oh and my 1st post so hi everyone =) Enkay 12-12-2007, 02:41 PM Here's my take on it.
http://www.expressphotoretouch.com/free/girl_compare_rt.jpg
I wanted to make her prettier but still natural/casual looking. A lot of things could be done still... mouth seems a little sideways, if you want to make it less casual you could always add makeup and there's some over magenta / green / yellow overtones here and there I'd have to take care of with masks but I'm not in the mood for that right now!
If you have questions about how specific things were done or comments (I like feedback, good and bad) feel free to let me know! grannysdc 12-12-2007, 05:04 PM Had to re-visit this 25 year old that looks 13..
(wish I had those Genes!... but even then I would still be OLD!) Anyway here is my interpretation of an olderfied version
(just darkened a bit using a softlight Hue/Saturation layer, healed face and changed background.. did not do very much here) schmoken 12-14-2007, 12:46 PM Here's another shot:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v192/schmoken/forums/RTP/first-02.jpg ecols 12-15-2007, 03:24 AM Yeah, schmoken! That's really close to what I was looking for.. Some minor color adjustments & makeup and it's perfect.. StormFX 12-16-2007, 05:11 AM I give it a try. shootphoto 12-16-2007, 02:42 PM here's my go at it..... julchen2525 03-28-2008, 09:42 AM I gave her wavy hair too! :oD
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f99/Michelelcarpenter/first2.jpg
hey i really like the wavy hair and the make up! but i think you should work on the nose! one can see that you tried to make it smaller or something^^ rosierosierosie 03-30-2008, 01:03 PM How do you put the blush on her face and the eyeshadow? julchen2525 03-30-2008, 01:14 PM How do you put the blush on her face and the eyeshadow?
try that: make a new layer, take the brush, low the oppacity, pic a nice color und just paint the eyeshadow and the blush and with the softening filter (i dont know the real name my photoshop is german) and the layer oppacity you can make it look real diavolo 03-31-2008, 06:42 AM thi is my try...it s the first retouch that i do...so i don t know if it s good.. i ll like to listen to your opinion..:D57082 julchen2525 03-31-2008, 07:52 AM thi is my try...it s the first retouch that i do...so i don t know if it s good.. i ll like to listen to your opinion..:D57082
i like your first try, but it looks a little bit unnatural i think. but you did a good job with forming her face diavolo 03-31-2008, 08:07 AM hi!this is the 2nd version of my first try, i think it's a little better than the first...but i agree with julchen, it is a little (maybe too much) innatural... thanks julchen!what about this?57086 julchen2525 03-31-2008, 08:53 AM hi!this is the 2nd version of my first try, i think it's a little better than the first...but i agree with julchen, it is a little (maybe too much) innatural... thanks julchen!what about this?57086
yeah this one is much better =) allthough i think that the left cheek is too small comparing to the right one. but the rest is really good! diavolo 03-31-2008, 10:29 AM TA-TAAA!!and this one is the third and last (i hope) retouching of the girl:
57091
now i think that cheeks aren' t defferent...what do ypu think julchen?:D:D:D:D julchen2525 03-31-2008, 11:34 AM TA-TAAA!!and this one is the third and last (i hope) retouching of the girl:
57091
now i think that cheeks aren' t defferent...what do ypu think julchen?:D:D:D:D
the face is perfect now^^ but the hair doesnt fit any more^^ it looks strange somehow... but its okay :) you can stop working on it ^^ Imaginicole 04-07-2008, 02:46 PM First post. :] I'm really new to photo editing (so please, no harsh criticism! :[). I am also a digital painter, web designer, and graphics designer, so I thought I'd give photo editing a shot. There are still things I could do with fixing (put some texture to the skin, make the lips more clear, things like that), but I'm lazy. XP
Link (http://www.freewebs.com/eludedmemories/01Retouches/retouchedgirl.htm)
Rollover picture for original image (to compare). mikkimicole 04-07-2008, 03:47 PM my quick try... harborimages 04-09-2008, 12:00 AM Here's a newbie take on this retouch... dataflow 04-09-2008, 03:29 AM here is my try
some cloning of face
just add highpass filter(soft blending) x 2
and added makeup(soft blending of some paint)
and added white to the iris to bring out the eye color(overlay blending)
http://3ddataflow.com.au/m9media/second.jpg | |