View Full Version : Please give me an opinion on this touchup


tthor71
01-14-2008, 11:27 AM
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/tthor71/sample85.jpg

Swampy
01-14-2008, 01:52 PM
Welcome to RTP, tthor71.

You've done a great job recolorizing her face. The thing I find distracting though is the tan line on her chest.

lilysharon
01-14-2008, 02:01 PM
Nice retouch.
I would erase back in her eyes and teeth but very nicely done I'd say.

tthor71
01-14-2008, 03:34 PM
thanks for your input!

scoresbaby
01-14-2008, 04:52 PM
Great Job.

ctzn
01-14-2008, 05:08 PM
Considering black skin is rather challenging to re-touch you have done a fine job. On a critical note, I find the face to look quite 'modeled' and therefore ruins the integrity of the real factor.

Perhaps try toning down the brush strokes and just eliminating some of the blemishes. Then go in and do detail touch ups on areas that need it.

nyxxie
01-16-2008, 12:50 AM
I've seen your posts on Craigslist.

Forbidden
01-30-2008, 10:41 PM
She looks nice :)

I would tone down the blur just a bit more though ... Her complexion is very good, you really don't need a lot of it, ya know? GL

ms152190
01-30-2008, 11:30 PM
Nice one.

here is my take,

it's color cast on her hair, detail in hi-light/shadow, and contrast in her face that, I thought, could improve.

MS

hataproof818
02-04-2008, 02:17 PM
very nice work

joannaras
02-04-2008, 02:28 PM
I like it. Good Job!

yelhsaneerg
02-04-2008, 03:31 PM
looks very pretty...maybe ease up a little on the teeth whitening....it's almost glowing..other than that....great job :D

i-inspire
02-04-2008, 06:42 PM
It is beautiful. If I could change anything, it would be the eyes and teeth... too white, almost radioactive.