trying a beauty retouch here with this pic
added eye makeup
cleaned the skin up with healing tool
added some hair
curves
levels
neat image
sharped
adjusted eye and lip color

I think the hair looks funny ??? and maybe too much eye shadow??

would like some opinions{good or bad} on this I want to impove my skills
Thanks OoF

Unfortuntely, to my eyes, the added makeup and hair looks dated and the skin tone and eyes look unnatural, but maybe the skin tone is a clash with the eyes

Speaking from a ppsition of complete retouching ignorance, my impression is that the original is dull and flat and that certainly would affect the final product.
(The after eyes have a little children-of-the-damned look)

I worry about the shape of her head.