Hi, most of my work is jewelry and products., trying to step in to different field here is the photo(hi iso)
http://edgarmaivel.com/client/B&A.jpg
Best regards,
Edgar
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hey awesome job, very natural looking, howd you go about this workflow.

the eyes are a bit to white but other then that it looks good

+1 the eyes - much too white.

Also, I would have left her hair as it was - you've lost some detail in the highlights.

Thanks, I agree about the eyes, but the print looks better (from full size file),
As for hairs I blow out the highlights intentionally.
Best regards,
Edgar
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The eyes as mentioned and I agree about the hair losing detail. and I would have toned down the hot spot on her temple, as you did in the cheek. The skin looks strange by her ring and middle finger compared to the rest of it. The top lip shape lost some of its definition in the retouch. Changing up the background as well would help the image. Overall I think you did a nice job :)

Devon

Thanks! Devon that part doesn't really bother me (the finger area), this is hi iso-grainy image. As of background i just want to live as it is. It just doesn’t pay to invest more time in to this image I’d rather to move on...And i got the point, thank you.
fixed
http://edgarmaivel.com/client/B&A2.jpg
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