View Full Version : old retouching of mine


beto.
03-23-2008, 07:55 PM
newbie here! :D

before hand, i'd like to say that these retouched images were made years ago when i was sort of a newbie in the 'retouching' business as well (not that i'm anywhere near professional anyway).
i'd love to hear some critique from you guys :D

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs21/f/2007/304/9/9/9959fa3c2e000f0c.jpg
made about four years ago i think?

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs20/f/2007/306/6/1/61e4e9527b6ed658.jpg
this one from last year

http://untrue.deviantart.com/art/retouching-06-68685035
and this one is more of a manipulation/edition than retouching.


(:

JMB
03-24-2008, 01:33 PM
Bem vindo! =D

Vou falar em inglês pro pessoal não reclamar... ok?

First and second images - Skin looks blured, without any details at wall. Skin without pores looks fake... so, you need to fix that. Never blur.

Third one - I really like that one. Looks natural. I like what you did in her eyes (some maybe thought that's too much but.. that's my opinion). You could maybe, play a little more with shadows in her body, you know?

Rayman006
05-25-2008, 02:57 AM
I tried this one myself. I really like the britney one. its crazy how celebs dont looks anything like what they do in the magz.

Mchilly
05-27-2008, 12:30 AM
The first retouched (Madonna) looks artificial to me, maybe you can change the color a bit but the other 2 looks good.

lets_do_retouch
05-28-2008, 04:03 AM
The retouch looks good to me.
I suggest you change the skin tone it really looks not natural to the naked eye.