2 works. You tell me.

Before (with some levels so you can see all the actual info)
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/8504/modelbeforemeae3.jpg
After
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/271/modelaftermezq5.jpg

Before (with some levels)
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3650/fafter1zz8.jpg
After
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3710/fbefore1ik2.jpg

AltIvan,
You posted this in, "Critiques - The place to get serious, in-depth analysis and opinions of your work"

Suggestion:
Buy some high end magazines and check out the covers and feature pictures inside and look for mistakes then look again at this attempt (this is just my opinion).

So.. If you are serious about getting into Glamour.. you need a serious critique.

A starting critique on the first set..:
(like submitting a first draft)

Just playing. Gave myself 15 minutes. Yes much more needed. Don't feel like making lashes - brows- etc. Just having fun.
~Nancy

AltIvan,
You posted this in, "Critiques - The place to get serious, in-depth analysis and opinions of your work"

Suggestion:
Buy some high end magazines and check out the covers and feature pictures inside and look for mistakes then look again at this attempt (this is just my opinion).

So.. If you are serious about getting into Glamour.. you need a serious critique.

A starting critique on the first set..:
(like submitting a first draft)


O RIGHT! that is what i am talking about!
Going to take your advices; yeah, i actually don see to many hight-end and there is few (and maybe none) to buy around my city but surely in internet i can find something interesting. (a probably stupid question, this is high-end ,right? (http://www.iconiamoda.com/magazine/?cat=101))


I came to the forums to create another thread for another work but looks like is pretty bad after all; good to know because silence was killing me.

Here is the another work, a little bit better,

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/4310/n3sa6.jpg
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/5208/n0xi6.jpg