Hi all

[palms]

hi to all of you
please bear with me as this is the first time i have submitted any of my work here, I have been loitering for a while trying to take everything in ( i found learning a bit at a time the better way to go ) and hopefully i have got it right pleeease put me right if i haven't

the picture (hopefully attached) is one i done following trimoons watercolour tut with a couple of differences. this also is my first attempt at this type of work.
but i am finding it hard to sort my time out between taking photo's, trying new ideas out or reading the posts here.

thanks for listening and looking

[cardmnal]

Hi palms1,

Great job with your first submission. I hope to see many more.

Let me begin by saying I love the subject of your work and your colors are great. Its a very good piece, your water color painting is very convincing, the image has strong structure and a very good texture. I also think you did a fine job on your "matting and framing".

You may want to add a hint of the closeline back into the pic as it almost seems as though the laundry is floating in air. The left-hand side appears to be a bit blurry or shadowy and loses a bit of definition. Of course this is just my humble opinion and an expert I am not.

i am finding it hard to sort my time out between taking photo's, trying new ideas out or reading the posts here.

I know what you mean but it is all soooo worth it!


AP

[palms]

Thank you for your kind words
It wasnt till i posted the picture that i noticed the blurriness, and i hadnt noticed that the line was missing! although not sure i would of put it in, it adds a bit of quirkyness i think
so i think maybe you should have a bit more faith in your humble opinion
and once again thanks
palms