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Old 06-13-2005, 08:38 AM
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new @ retouchPro

Hi - i'm quite new to photo-retouching and therefore new @ retouchPro ... I'm trying to improve my abilities in retouching ... I look up to all these great artists who touch up pictures for magazines *sigh*

well i'm trying to make some touch ups - this is my last one:
http://www.juern.de/retouch.php?id=113

what do you think? any hints for techniques to make it better?
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Old 06-13-2005, 08:51 AM
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Superb work i left you a message

Great downloads too THANKS!!!

Welcome to the forum!

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Old 06-13-2005, 08:57 AM
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Thanks =)

hrhr@ "boob-job" ... it was on demand =) i had no problems with her original "size" - but she had .... women! ;-)
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Old 06-13-2005, 08:57 AM
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PS...Loved your site, looked it over and its very well maintained, easy to look at, great site hun!
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Old 06-13-2005, 09:05 AM
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*blush* ... thank you =)
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Old 06-13-2005, 09:09 AM
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The first thing that I noticed was the lines from the nose to the sides of the mouth. I think it is still too prominent.

The hair is a bit orange, but I'm not sure if that's a good thing or bad thing for a glamour magazine. For me, it's fine.

On the wrinkles, boob job, tummy tuck and all, you did a very good job. Keep it up!
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Old 06-13-2005, 09:14 AM
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thanks ... with "the lines from the nose to the sides of the mouth." ... you mean the cheeks ?? well yeah i knwo they are a bit too harsh ... but well it looked kind a "smeared" wenn I tried to make'em smoother ... :-/ but I#ll keep trying
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Old 06-13-2005, 11:10 AM
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j-c welcome to RetouchPRO.
A very nice job you did there.

There are some minor quibbles, but nothing so important that it in any way detracts from the final image:

1) The lady, in the original has high prominent cheeks, in the touch-up the right-side cheek have been smoothed and became flatter, however the outline of the left-side cheek retains the original shape;
2) There seems to be some streaks on the arm (lengthwise);
3) There seems to be a "clone path" in the middle of the arm.

..these are just tiny nitpicks however, nobody would ever notice this stuff - everything else is perfect!!

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Old 06-13-2005, 12:53 PM
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It looks great to me & I love your site If I ever want a boob job I may just come to you
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Old 06-13-2005, 01:01 PM
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Thank you very much for this very warm welcome - I already feel comfortable here =)

@ byRo - thanks for these hints - i'll fix it (at least i'll try to ...)

@ PamSav ... errm *blush*
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