my first car poster

[bert de wolff]

using the so-called 'illustrated look'
please critique

thanks
bert

[Kraellin]

hi bert,

mostly looks good and almost anything i would criticize here can be chalked up to jpg compression. however, there is one 'paste' line running from the back of the front wheel to the front of the back wheel that shows up. other than that, great job!

Craig

[bert de wolff]

thanks craig !

yes i noticed the line after posting the pic, it must have appeared with flattening the layers. taken care of now

bert

Originally Posted by Kraellin

hi bert,

mostly looks good and almost anything i would criticize here can be chalked up to jpg compression. however, there is one 'paste' line running from the back of the front wheel to the front of the back wheel that shows up. other than that, great job!

Craig

[fembot]

Bert,

I can't help but be completely distracted by the reflection of the guy taking the picture in the headlight, and the bush or tree a little bit further back

Other than that it's nice.

Fembot

[bert de wolff]

you were absolutely right, i worked on it some more

thanks
bert

Originally Posted by fembot

Bert,

I can't help but be completely distracted by the reflection of the guy taking the picture in the headlight, and the bush or tree a little bit further back

Other than that it's nice.

Fembot

[NancyJ]

Massive improvement, though the sparkles are probably going a little too far

[twinkissed]

I completely agree with NancyJ. I would do away with the sparkles. That is if you're wanting to keep the realism. But as for the rest the improvement is 200%. Keep up the great work.

[Kraellin]

very nicely done!

Craig