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Old 11-15-2005, 05:19 PM
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May I have your comments on this one

This was one of my first attempts at manipulating / restoring a photo

I attempted this some months ago, but I still thing it's quite good

The couple are my nan & grandad, a picture of them on the bench together never existed.

Your comments, tips etc are welcomed
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Old 11-15-2005, 05:34 PM
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Well done i bet your grandparents are proud of you!

Perfect!!!
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Old 11-15-2005, 05:49 PM
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Old 11-15-2005, 06:40 PM
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I really like Glen's idea. I'm sure with Bearinbrum's skills something believable could be done including proper shadowing.

BTW did Gran know he was out with her purse?

Cheers

Dave
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Old 11-15-2005, 08:38 PM
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Great job I would not change a thing;-)
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Old 11-18-2005, 07:37 AM
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Thanks for your comments and suggestions

I will have a play at that, tho the only reason I didnt do it was because when I overlaid my nan, she covered my grandads arm up - so I just thought that leaving it out was the more realistic option. Though I do see that there is a new challange there for me to conquer!
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Old 11-18-2005, 02:58 PM
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Excellent piece of work. One very minor suggestion. Your Gran's face could do with sharpening very slightly to make it match that of your Grandfather, there's a very slight difference between the two which does not quite look right.
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retrospectively have to agree with Gary
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