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Old 12-30-2005, 11:04 AM
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oh those eyes

they should keep the chill out

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Old 12-30-2005, 12:36 PM
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nicely done Bert, do i detect a hint of Mr Buonforte's tutorial there ?

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Old 12-31-2005, 02:32 AM
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hi palms and thanks
oh yes definitely something of mr buonforte, and of phyllis stewart, a little personal twist and some impressionist on the BG. promises a nice combo

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nicely done Bert, do i detect a hint of Mr Buonforte's tutorial there ?

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Old 12-31-2005, 09:56 AM
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bert,

a remarkable looking woman and i love almost everything you've done here, the hair, the eyes and so on, but one thing is driving me a bit nuts on this one. her right cheek bone seems very ... angular, bony, as if her cheek bone were sticking up too high and the hollow of the cheek were too hollow. i believe this is just a shading thing. i also believe there shld be a bit of a curve to that shading line on that cheek.

i'm attaching an image that somewhat shows what i mean. it's not quite right either and just ignore that i removed your canvas texture. i just wanted to show the shading that i meant.

also, if you meant for this to be this way as a sort of counterpoint to the rest of the image, then ok, ignore everything

also, i'd love to see the original to see why you did what you did. without the original my critique may also be all wet.

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