Critiques - - 1 Month in Retouchpro.com

studioj · #1 03-04-2006, 09:46 AM

I have a month running across the forums, the tutorials, and it have helped me a lot. I used to do retouch for fun and of course, my job required a little of retouch on every pic.

But now I think I'll going to do my website and run a bussiness of retouch at my town.

By the way, yesterday, in 1 hour work, I finished this project...

THANKS FOR ALL YOUR GUIDE AND HELP TO ALL!

studioj · #2 03-04-2006, 11:26 AM

Oh, I forgot, please critique

maureeno · #3 03-04-2006, 12:31 PM

You did a beautiful job!

Maureen

Kraellin · #4 03-04-2006, 02:27 PM

very nicely done. i like how you moved her (or him) to get rid of the distance between them. good job!

i think the colors are a bit over-saturated, however.

the lighting is good. you've emphasized the right areas.

all in all, something to be proud of.

craig

Gary Richardson · #5 03-04-2006, 02:49 PM

Excellent work.

LonK · #6 03-04-2006, 08:03 PM

Nicely done. The composition is so much better. Is that you and your lady?

bart_hickman · #7 03-04-2006, 08:52 PM

Nice job. I like how you made the veil look transparent.

The lighting on the couple looks a bit too warm for the background. Maybe either warm up the background or cool down the colors on the couple using a color balance adjust.

Bart

aylaah · #8 03-05-2006, 01:50 AM

I love it! Well done!

It looks like a frame-worthy wedding picture now, that is fantastic!

No real critique for you, I guess what the others said but their eyes are sharper than mine! I love the result. It's hard to believe it was from the same picture!

studioj · #9 03-06-2006, 05:52 PM

Thanks for the critique to all, really, the colors are really oversaturated, my minilab (well, I wish it was mine), I mean, the guy who prints this have a different calibration on his machine, so It's ready to print and the saturation it's just for the machine, the print came up really nice!.

About the warm light that bart said, you are right!, I should balance that.

And no Lonk, I'm not he. He is well, The brother of my uncle's wife. Easy

But they are not related with us.

I'll put an avatar of my pic right now.

Kraellin · #10 03-07-2006, 12:35 AM

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the colors are really oversaturated, my minilab (well, I wish it was mine), I mean, the guy who prints this have a different calibration on his machine, so It's ready to print and the saturation it's just for the machine

ah, so the over-saturation had a purpose. good

and again, nicely done!

craig