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Old 05-17-2006, 12:07 PM
JGomez3d JGomez3d is offline
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Hello, New here =) comments plz

Hi.

First post here.

This is something I had to do for work and was just wondering if there was any advice or critiques that you guys could give me. The picture is one of my own.

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Old 05-17-2006, 12:15 PM
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hi jgomez3d,

welcome to RP.

before making any comments, i just want to know which is the before and which is the after? i think i know, but just want to be sure here.

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Old 05-17-2006, 01:11 PM
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Old 05-17-2006, 02:27 PM
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Hi there,

And welcome to the RetouchPRO forums. Judging by the attached potos I'd say you did a proficient job removing the fence - impressive, really.

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Old 05-17-2006, 06:58 PM
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hi JGomez3d ,
you did a good clean work
I like it
but if I can say, I would correct the column on the upper left side
(I think, it should be vertical )
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Old 05-18-2006, 01:47 AM
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This is excellent! Good job. It must've taken a lot of time. I looked at it in ps and couldn't see any mistakes and I thought all your choices were perfect. In the future, if you want to check out your stuff to find errors, bring up brightness/contrast and play with the sliders, lightening the image. It will show all your mistakes if there are any.
The pic only needs a final levels adjustment, and a couple touch ups, but the fence removal is a beautiful thing.

Great job - keep it up.

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Old 05-18-2006, 05:57 AM
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Hi JGomez3d,

welcome to RP!

I couldn't agree more with Mig about the quality of you work in removing the fence ... clean, accurate excellent!!!

Using your fixed image, (hoping you don't mind...) I straighten the column ... and balanced the shadows a bit ...
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Old 05-18-2006, 08:26 AM
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Wow thanks Flora looks great.

Heheh Is out printing already =( it was a pretty rushed job, we needed it printed asap so I only had about 2-3 huors to remove the fence from that picture and from 2 others of the same pool different angles slap them on a 21x27 sample board and send them to print because of the 8 week delay.

Thank you all for yuor comments.

Edit: Bad bad bad spelling......There's probably still more around =/

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Old 05-18-2006, 09:23 AM
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JGomez3d, welcome to RetouchPRO.

A very good job you did there - in fact so good that I took it as a challenge to find something.....anything...

Only found one - on the darker part at the bottom of the left column, to the right edge there's a remnant of the very top of the fence.

But don't worry - normal people would never notice.

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Old 05-18-2006, 09:35 AM
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Gosh ,

I've only just 'upgraded' my glasses ... but, obviously, I need new ones!!!
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