| Firstly, you're retouching an image that has already been retouched, so it doesnt really need any extra work.
The breast work was poorly done, you removed here hair and filled out the breast but left the shadow, leaving her very malformed.
You also left the blue reflections on her which empahsise the 'cutout' look. The finished image is bland, it certainly doesnt make me want to buy levis (especially since they're barely visible) |