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Old 07-08-2006, 04:16 AM
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illustrated look motorbike

here's my first go at a motorbike with illustrated look

what do you think ?

all the best

bert
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Old 07-08-2006, 10:41 AM
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The blues in the chrome look a bit strong for me.

So I did a hue/sat adjustment layer, and desaturated the blues and cyans a touch.

Other than that minor quibble, love the composition, framing and general appearance of your picture.
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Old 07-08-2006, 10:50 AM
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Looks great Bert any chance of posting your workflow?
are you changing from horses to horse power

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Old 07-09-2006, 09:40 AM
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gary - thks your input, i went for a 'pimp my bike'-look, all bling etc, may have gone overboard here and there

palms - thks - yes, anything with horses will do just fine, just one or many more

thks guys
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Old 07-09-2006, 10:27 AM
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I think it looks great Bert. Thi type of art usually does use strong colors and effects, works for me.
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Old 07-10-2006, 02:13 AM
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thanks, appreciated!
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