critique please.

[pindaro]

hi guys.

I'm learning a lot in this forum (I least i think)

Here's the latest kind of extensive advertising work I've done to see your comments.

thanks in advance.

[Photo678]

hey....xicons guy!!!......whoohoo...i know you from my aquasoft days.

shot looks good

[KR1156]

What was this ad for.....is it supposed to be humorous??

only reason i ask that is bc the grooms shirt is sticking out of his fly!!
and you made the little boy's eyes look funny!

You did a great job on the angle of the bride's head, and the branches in the background. I also like the the highlight and shadow painting you did on the people, looks cool.

[pindaro]

Photo678:
Yeap, it's me... I'm very impressed that you remembered!! I'm kind of lazy with Icons lately since I'm having so much fun taking pictures and retouching!


KR1156:
It's supposed to be kinda funny since it's ad for a wedding planner.

Thanks for the comments guys!