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Old 08-16-2006, 12:13 PM
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Retouch critic

You must be sick of me already

Retouched: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/38113676/

Original: http://www.deviantart.com/view/38113494/

It's suposed to be seamless.

Take a close look at the ear, it took me an hour to remove all the hair
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Old 08-16-2006, 12:56 PM
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What distracts me are the white spots at the left of her eye, they immediately caught my attention away.

And maybe you'd fix the eyes a bit, eyeballs look excellent if you give them a slight blue hue. You always do that when painting, eyeballs are never plain white.

Oh, and the hair on her ear is still visible
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Old 08-16-2006, 01:23 PM
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What distracts me are the white spots at the left of her eye, they immediately caught my attention away.

And maybe you'd fix the eyes a bit, eyeballs look excellent if you give them a slight blue hue. You always do that when painting, eyeballs are never plain white.

Oh, and the hair on her ear is still visible
Yeah I didn't know if I should keep the white spots.
I always go crazy with the eyeballs I'm going to give that blue hue a try.

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Old 08-16-2006, 01:26 PM
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I think on the original, her eyes, the color part, look more round, and the retouched version...the black edges that you darkened look a little more rough almost like angled edges going around. Maybe just round it out a little more. I like the skin work, and also the slimming down of the fingers.
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Old 08-16-2006, 09:22 PM
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it's critique ;-)
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Old 08-17-2006, 03:28 AM
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it's critique ;-)
I'm sorry but this annoys me. English is not her first language and I think she does one helluva lot better than most native English speakers!!!
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Old 08-17-2006, 03:35 AM
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yikes...simmer down...i wasn't being mean about it or anything, was just saying is all.
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Old 08-17-2006, 04:29 AM
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Can we agree on critism?
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Old 08-17-2006, 06:46 AM
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Smile Can't type

I get confused.

By the way... Thanks Ziapra
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Old 08-17-2006, 11:53 PM
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Can we agree on critism?
I luv that. You should copyright it! Patrick, could u clarify blue in the eyes. Normally the whites would have an element of red ie veins but I'm sure ur tryin to say something else.

Dave
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