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Old 09-19-2006, 08:44 AM
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Vintage car illustration

Encountered this old Packard recently and though it would be nice material for an illustration-look image

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Old 09-19-2006, 10:28 AM
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Nicely done... Is blue the original paint color?

Since you posted in Critiques, I assume you want feedback. If you're intending this as a standalone image, IMO it needs "something" underneath, if nothing else, faint shadows under the wheels. Just floating in air looks unnatural.

If the BG is coming in a future step, ignore the preceding.
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Old 09-21-2006, 06:22 AM
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hi danny, thanks, yes this a an on-going project, am still looking for a suitable BG, an old city illustration would be nice. and yes this is the colour the car's got now (can't imagine it's the original)

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