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| BVLGARI ads. Hi, as a homework, i have to suggest a new image for BVLGARI ads, this is my idea... what do you think /suggest. Thx |
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| Re: BVLGARI ads. Sorry, Annabell... what is BVLGARI? Great composition! |
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| Re: BVLGARI ads. |
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| Re: BVLGARI ads. Makes sense now. The focus of your image is so much on the pregnant woman I couldn't associate the ring. Very good, Annabel. |
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| Re: BVLGARI ads. like swampy said, the focus is a bit wrong here. i dont quite understand the hands that are in the way of the woman. i do like the rest of it, though. if the hands werent there, the picture says to me, married and pregnant, which is a very good message. i'd also make the ring a bit more prominent if possible. craig |
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| Re: BVLGARI ads. Not Me..the first thing I saw was the rings..both on her finger and then in the corner. It looks like a good ad to me!! I am taking the consumer role here. I did see the jewelry first!! I am not even a jewelry nut either!! Neb |
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| Re: BVLGARI ads. I like this idea and to make it stronger, I would get rid of the hands and its shadows (if possible, perhaps you have a picture without it?) and then I would link the ring to the belly button in some way. So they make a connection together, which perhaps would make it more intriguing... |
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| Re: BVLGARI ads. I personally think the hands create the focus point which diminishes the jewellery |
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