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Old 10-02-2006, 11:26 AM
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BVLGARI ads.

Hi, as a homework, i have to suggest a new image for BVLGARI ads, this is my idea... what do you think /suggest.

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Old 10-02-2006, 11:40 AM
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Re: BVLGARI ads.

Sorry, Annabell... what is BVLGARI?

Great composition!
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Old 10-02-2006, 11:43 AM
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Re: BVLGARI ads.

http://www.bulgari.com

it's a jewels manufacturer enterprise.
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Old 10-02-2006, 12:42 PM
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Re: BVLGARI ads.

Makes sense now. The focus of your image is so much on the pregnant woman I couldn't associate the ring.

Very good, Annabel.
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Old 10-02-2006, 01:59 PM
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Re: BVLGARI ads.

like swampy said, the focus is a bit wrong here. i dont quite understand the hands that are in the way of the woman. i do like the rest of it, though. if the hands werent there, the picture says to me, married and pregnant, which is a very good message. i'd also make the ring a bit more prominent if possible.

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Old 10-02-2006, 10:28 PM
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Re: BVLGARI ads.

Not Me..the first thing I saw was the rings..both on her finger and then in the corner. It looks like a good ad to me!! I am taking the consumer role here. I did see the jewelry first!! I am not even a jewelry nut either!!

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Old 10-06-2006, 10:11 PM
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Re: BVLGARI ads.

I like this idea and to make it stronger, I would get rid of the hands and its shadows (if possible, perhaps you have a picture without it?) and then I would link the ring to the belly button in some way. So they make a connection together, which perhaps would make it more intriguing...
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Old 10-07-2006, 09:39 AM
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Re: BVLGARI ads.

I personally think the hands create the focus point which diminishes the jewellery
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