Critiques - - BVLGARI ads.

Anabelle · #1 10-02-2006, 10:26 AM

Hi, as a homework, i have to suggest a new image for BVLGARI ads, this is my idea... what do you think /suggest.

Thx

Swampy · #2 10-02-2006, 10:40 AM

Sorry, Annabell... what is BVLGARI?

Great composition!

Anabelle · #3 10-02-2006, 10:43 AM

http://www.bulgari.com

it's a jewels manufacturer enterprise.

Swampy · #4 10-02-2006, 11:42 AM

Makes sense now. The focus of your image is so much on the pregnant woman I couldn't associate the ring.

Very good, Annabel.

Kraellin · #5 10-02-2006, 12:59 PM

like swampy said, the focus is a bit wrong here. i dont quite understand the hands that are in the way of the woman. i do like the rest of it, though. if the hands werent there, the picture says to me, married and pregnant, which is a very good message. i'd also make the ring a bit more prominent if possible.

craig

nebgranny · #6 10-02-2006, 09:28 PM

Not Me..the first thing I saw was the rings..both on her finger and then in the corner. It looks like a good ad to me!! I am taking the consumer role here. I did see the jewelry first!! I am not even a jewelry nut either!!

Neb

gi1976 · #7 10-06-2006, 09:11 PM

I like this idea and to make it stronger, I would get rid of the hands and its shadows (if possible, perhaps you have a picture without it?) and then I would link the ring to the belly button in some way. So they make a connection together, which perhaps would make it more intriguing...

Cassidy · #8 10-07-2006, 08:39 AM

I personally think the hands create the focus point which diminishes the jewellery