hi there...
my name is mario and i am new to retouchpro..just wanted to say hello to all of you and show my first attempt in retouching. the pic shows my wife dana.. it was taken during a photoshoot the other days...
i use
ps cs2 and want to improve my skills in retouching like some glamour or fashion artists. Especially i like jil greenbergs or amy dressers style a lot and so i found this board where the stlye is disussed...
i immediately tried this to the pic of my wife and want to know your opinion on it.. what could i do better ? please feel free to take the original pic and show your work as well so i can learn from you

1. ist original ... 2nd is skin retouched .. .3rd is pwl
thx in advance
mario