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learning retouching - critique very appreciated

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Old 10-05-2006, 05:33 AM
bullys1974 bullys1974 is offline
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learning retouching - critique very appreciated

hi there...
my name is mario and i am new to retouchpro..just wanted to say hello to all of you and show my first attempt in retouching. the pic shows my wife dana.. it was taken during a photoshoot the other days...
i use ps cs2 and want to improve my skills in retouching like some glamour or fashion artists. Especially i like jil greenbergs or amy dressers style a lot and so i found this board where the stlye is disussed...

i immediately tried this to the pic of my wife and want to know your opinion on it.. what could i do better ? please feel free to take the original pic and show your work as well so i can learn from you
1. ist original ... 2nd is skin retouched .. .3rd is pwl

thx in advance
mario
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Old 10-05-2006, 06:01 AM
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Re: learning retouching - critique very appreciated

You have done very well, that is a good retouch!
Don't forget to do the eyes, there are veins that could be removed and in your painting with light on the light layer, paint a low opacity yellow into the brown of her iris to make them pop!
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