Very nice work,
HALX.
The fixes to the neck and nose were very well executed and help making for a more attractive result.
However (
yep, here it comes), unless it was some sort of personal / client's artistic choice, I don't agree with the loss of detail in the hair.
There are some interesting elements in the darker portions which have completely disappeared into the shadows.
For me, at least, the big black blobs of hair could be a lot better.
Rô