Go Back   RetouchPRO > Technique > Critiques
Register Blogs FAQ Site Nav Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Critiques The place to get serious, in-depth analysis and opinions of your work


Thread Tools
Old 12-07-2006, 08:20 PM
skydog's Avatar
skydog skydog is offline
Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Carolina
Posts: 1,293
Re: Portrait

Okay...I took a shot...
Cleaned up my photo with levels, and a little shapening.
I created a layer..added some blue and yellow and smudged it around.
Then created mask to bring ou the pic from below.
Then tried a little smudging of the photo.
I think if I have the right brush, the right pressure, the right stroke, and a little more time and practice..I'd have something, but I still definitely like YOURS!
Attached Images
File Type: jpg IMG_6025s.jpg (74.9 KB, 47 views)
File Type: jpg 2IMGs.jpg (82.3 KB, 74 views)
Reply With Quote top
Old 12-17-2006, 03:17 PM
Craig Walters's Avatar
Craig Walters Craig Walters is offline
Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: somewhere over there
Posts: 8,786
Blog Entries: 4
Re: Portrait

i like the hair, background, clothing, love the eyes, and like the lips/teeth and ears.

i dont like the shading at the sides of her forehead... too strong. dont like the shading over her lip/under her nose....just a bit too strong. and especially dont like the cheeks... too pink. also have lost a bit of depth with the cheeks to the eyes by removing the shadows, but this is almost irrelevant to this piece.

so, this is just what i like and dont like about it, not whether it's 'good' or 'bad'.
Reply With Quote top

  RetouchPRO > Technique > Critiques

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Painted Portrait - Hobby or Money Maker? Photomaster Critiques 16 12-06-2010 09:40 AM
Rant/Bitch about copyright and my senior portrait Mark Adams Legal Issues 15 08-15-2007 12:10 PM
Very dark shadow in facial portrait Nisko Image Help 15 02-20-2007 04:34 PM
Help with old portrait Ezra Image Help 6 07-12-2006 08:59 AM
Portrait Retouching T Paul Photo Retouching 0 07-01-2003 09:53 PM

All times are GMT -6. The time now is 01:36 AM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2016, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO ©2011, Crawlability, Inc.
Copyright © 2016 Doug Nelson. All Rights Reserved