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Old 01-06-2007, 04:56 PM
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Workin on a style NSFW

For my portfolio (again)

I know it's a nude, but nothing can be seen
What do you think?

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/146/3...35036cc2_o.jpg

Original from the talented Q http://www.quocvo.nl/
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Old 01-06-2007, 05:52 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

Normally I dont like over-smoothed skin... but that retouching is great! As opposed to most ultra-smooth skin which looks like a face painting put on top of a photograph, yours looks like an intentional, otherworldly concept.

Can you give any workflow/technique tips?
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Old 01-06-2007, 06:15 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

To my untrained eye, it looks like you've gone too far in reducing her color. She was too red to start with, but now she looks very pale.
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Old 01-06-2007, 06:50 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

It's mostly dodge and burn (Face, body and Hair)

hair was retouched with a mask turned up the saturation and the magenta in the reds (Selective Color)

The body skintone was altered using selective color (- 70 magenta -80 black -15 Yellow aprox)

Also Hue/Saturation tu desaturate the reds a little.

The eyes were sharpened and altered with curves. and dodged/burned with a very small brush.
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Old 01-06-2007, 07:01 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

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To my untrained eye, it looks like you've gone too far in reducing her color. She was too red to start with, but now she looks very pale.
Yes, It was what I wanted... to make her pale, almost white, without desaturating the skin
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Old 01-07-2007, 09:30 AM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

Well done Godmother, think you have achieved your goal
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Old 01-07-2007, 02:40 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

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Well done Godmother, think you have achieved your goal
Thank you very much. Hope the biz think so too. I need more work
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Old 01-07-2007, 03:19 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

Very nice, but the nose could do with some work. You've lightened the shadowed areas, particularly the nostrils, where even on pale skin, they should be dark.
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Old 01-07-2007, 03:27 PM
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Very nice, but the nose could do with some work. You've lightened the shadowed areas, particularly the nostrils, where even on pale skin, they should be dark.
Thats all you have to say? You are my favourite critic

Here go have some more for my portfolio, bring it on!

Retouched:
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/144/3...17fa2afc_o.jpg

Original from Q
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/135/3...98fe392d_o.jpg


Here you can see the full retouch of the redhead:
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/133/3...7c7faced_o.jpg
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Old 01-07-2007, 06:16 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

Sorry hun, I was posting in a rush - I'll look at them properly in the morning.
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Old 01-09-2007, 01:55 PM
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Another Style for the same portfolio

Another Style for the same portfolio.

This was a request from a client: He wanted airbrushed look but with pores and texture.

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/133/3...be98fd56_b.jpg

Photographer: Glen Grant
Model: Lauren
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Old 01-09-2007, 04:36 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

Can we all practice & post our results with these photos?
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Old 01-09-2007, 04:56 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

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Can we all practice & post our results with these photos?

As long as you don't post them outside Retouh Pro and even here if it is outside this thread (always in retouchpro) you have to credit the photographer and the model and link back here. No problem.
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Old 01-27-2007, 03:25 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

Really like your work, especially on the redhead. Is it too much to ask that you post the link to your Flickr page? I'd love to check out some more of your stuff...
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Old 01-27-2007, 07:46 PM
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Re: Workin on a style NSFW

Lovely, awesome skin tones you created. I love it. If you wanna you can email me and we can trade some tips, tricks and critique some stuff for each other some time.
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