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Old 01-29-2007, 07:21 PM
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tell me what you think

Here is a restoration i did from a identification photo.Tell me what you think
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Old 01-29-2007, 08:19 PM
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Re: tell me what you think

It looks very good. The lower lip doesn't look quite right; it looks like she is pulling the lip tight to her face.
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Old 01-29-2007, 09:07 PM
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Re: tell me what you think

Joey's got a point..
The lightness under the lip makes it jut out..simple shading would push it back.
You also have two different weaves on the sweater..
Nice job..

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Old 01-29-2007, 11:54 PM
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Re: tell me what you think

A great job! In addition to the other suggestions, work a bit on HER left eyebrow, our right. Has a little nick on top.
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Old 01-30-2007, 11:01 AM
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Re: tell me what you think

In general a very commendable job.

My main criticism is you've overdone the contrast, and her temple and upper cheek areas are a touch blown out.
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