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Old 02-13-2007, 06:26 PM
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Artistic photo critique

Im experimenting and wanted to know what people think of this image. I am going for an artistic look. What do you think could make it better?
Thanks in advance
Christopher
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Old 02-14-2007, 07:31 AM
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Re: Artistic photo critique

Hi Christopher,first let me say its pretty hard to critique someone elses art
you have to look at it honestly and say did i achieve what i wanted to with this piece.That said I think the background colors are a little hot,but its just a personnel opinion,show it to 100 different people get 100 different answers

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Old 02-14-2007, 09:07 AM
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Re: Artistic photo critique

Thanks. Appreciate the input.
Chris



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Hi Christopher,first let me say its pretty hard to critique someone elses art
you have to look at it honestly and say did i achieve what i wanted to with this piece.That said I think the background colors are a little hot,but its just a personnel opinion,show it to 100 different people get 100 different answers

zganie
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Old 02-14-2007, 10:41 AM
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Re: Artistic photo critique

hi Chris
What is the focal point you want people to see?
I find myself looking at the way the light post and her shirt meet or almost meet, and I think you might want the focus to be more on the top half of the girl, not just her chest.

Try moving the light post down, or soften it.

I like the bright colors.

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