hi gwen,
sorry, i shld have been more clear. you can post anything here for a critique. i was only suggesting, that with your love of art, you might also want to play in the art forums, not that this was the wrong place to post what you did.
as for the critique(s) or lack thereof, give it time. and also bear in mind that 'art' is harder to critique than retouching or restoration. and, the image is somewhat small here.
also, i like to be able to just click on the thumbnail and see the thing here rather than have to download it to paint shop pro to see it well. so, there's my first critique right there