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Old 05-27-2007, 03:47 PM
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critique please

In this pic I' m not realy interested to "save" the skinstructure e.o....just try to create a special mood.

Image taken with hasselblad 503 + leaf 17 mgp
leaf capture pro, photoshop Cs2, noise ninja, your daily dodge and burn, unshap mask etc etc..

please let me know what you think about it...

http://www.mypicshare.com/niydhaujpic.html
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Old 05-27-2007, 05:53 PM
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Re: critique please

Ikagami

Over all well done. It has the look of an illustration. One thing that bothers me when looking at the picture is the extremely blownout white areas under her lower eye lids.
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Old 05-30-2007, 07:08 AM
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Re: critique please

hi ikagami

First its hard to critique because we do not know exactly what you wanted to achieve I agree with swampi the cheeks are totally blown out, but if thats the look you want then you achieved it.That said what are we comparing it to

just my 2 cents zganie
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