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Old 06-22-2007, 11:27 AM
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Postcards

HI...
I'm making postcards based on my hometown photos...
Please give very intense critiques,I have to start printing by the end of the day or tommorow morning...
Thank you

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Old 06-22-2007, 12:43 PM
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Re: Postcards

Very nice photos. They'll make great postcards. The colors need more punch, however - on my monitor they look flat and washed out. I don't like the duotoned one at all. Might work if all three images were toned to closely related hues, but for a postcard the color version is much better. I might make the smaller images in that one different sizes, depending on how it comes out. Then again, maybe not.
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Old 06-22-2007, 01:50 PM
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Re: Postcards

I have to agree with "lurch". For postcards I'd expect more pop and color. I gotta say your composition is excellent.
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Old 06-22-2007, 01:52 PM
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Re: Postcards

yup , u r right, the color's do need more touchups...
the duotone, I personaly don't like at all, but i wanted to make something diferent, and think that I'll pass on this one or try your coloring sugestion, and see how it will came up...
BUt I'm definetly delaying the printing, as longer i'm looking at them more and more corections came up...

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