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Old 07-28-2007, 04:24 PM
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Newbie Am I doing it good, what mistakes I make?

Heya I wanted to show you some of my latest retouching works and I would ask you to critique them and possibly give me some directions what further mistakes I should avoid etc. because I am learning Photoshop and photo manipulating for not so long yet and I do a lot of stuff wrong

Here it is:
http://www.mjretouch.webpark.pl

Also, here are my works that I posted here month ago, so you could maybe check if my progress is good, or no and I should change my new passion

http://mj-retouch.webpark.pl/in.html

Thank you very much for your help in this matter
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Old 07-28-2007, 04:54 PM
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Re: Am I doing it good, what mistakes I make?

i'm no professional by any means lol but i think they look pretty good....the only one i really have a comment about is the one with the girl leaning against the rock wall....the eye closest to the wall should naturally be darker as that side of the face is more shaded...yet it seems the white of her eye is way brighter on that eye than the other eye.....just a little too noticeable but i gets it just depends on who's looking anyway...hope this helps
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Old 07-29-2007, 09:15 AM
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Re: Am I doing it good, what mistakes I make?

To my eye, many of your pieces appear to have serious color problems that need to be corrected. Also, many of the imaages are "flat" and need more contrast.
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