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Old 08-10-2007, 02:29 AM
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I'm pursuing an abstract design...what do you think?
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Old 08-10-2007, 08:35 AM
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Re: Abstract?

That look cool, except for the bugs.. ewwwww :-)
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Old 08-10-2007, 10:33 AM
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Re: Abstract?

Pictures a little small to give any real feedback on execution, though the concept is interesting.

Flora has written some instructions on posting Images to the forums Here
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Old 08-10-2007, 10:44 AM
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Re: Abstract?

its looks a bit to "bloody" perhaps. what is it for?
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Old 08-10-2007, 11:32 AM
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Re: Abstract?

hi,
my 2 cents worth ,,, and remember art is in the eye of the beholder... smile..
also keep in mind i am just a joe smith avg guy... i never got into abtract that much...

overall interesting..... my interpretations was it on a counter top with food splashes and some roaches ...

I am not quiet sure what kind of abstract art your going for. it would probably help a little to understand your goal...

it seems to me your roaches are very representational, maybe going to a more non repsentational style to where the roaches are distorted (for use of a better word) resemblence and maybe a more pronounce diffference betweent them .to what they are, would work better... also the roaches looks to organize to me.. there aligned and all going in the same direction.... in my representational mind roaches never go in the same directions they alwys seems to be discorganized... smile

well there my 2 cents..



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Old 08-12-2007, 11:39 PM
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Re: Abstract?

Well thanks for the comments though, I'm kinda new to the abstract stuff , I know I have to learn more about this I'll keep all your thoughts on mind. I do believe that constant practice makes perfect lol
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Old 08-13-2007, 08:05 PM
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Re: Abstract?

Get rid of the bugs they are taking away from the overall design.They attract
your eye which ruins the overall look


just my opinion zganie
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Old 08-14-2007, 10:20 PM
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Yes I will...I'm working on other design
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