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Old 08-24-2007, 07:01 AM
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My first post. More than a retouch

I don't know if it is the right forum for this type work.

Maybe just a bit of background - I'm a photographer doing everything from models to weddings. I love the grunge style of PP work but there is not much of market for it, thus I only do it for my private collection.

This is a picture I took a while back and I didn't have much use for it and I started playing - ended up with this 8hrs later.

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s...DSCF0209-s.jpg

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Old 08-24-2007, 07:42 AM
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Re: My first post. More than a retouch

FaanP,

What can I say? It's not my taste in style, but that has no bearing. I don't know if it is well executed or not since I have no clue where you started, only where you ended up.
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Old 08-29-2007, 02:31 AM
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Re: My first post. More than a retouch

Well, it's very disturbing, but there's no doubt about your creative skill!
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Old 08-29-2007, 02:41 AM
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Re: My first post. More than a retouch

Thanks ... I think
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Old 09-04-2007, 07:47 PM
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Re: My first post. More than a retouch

Interesting has potential if I were you I would get rid of the bright green on the right side behind her head it does not add anything to the composition.
Also the word Machine you should make transparent so it fits in the composition better look at the writing in the top right corner it fits with the overall photo better

just my opinion zganie
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