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Old 10-11-2007, 11:42 AM
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Re: critique please

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I like how you do the eyes but something bothers me check out the left cheek, the lower portion of her ears its kinda dark it looks the girl has little bruise on her face.
Hi Mchilly,
I over did it on the burn tool there. Thanks for pointing that out.
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Old 10-15-2007, 09:12 AM
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Re: critique please

ok i wish i had original version to show what i would do.

You got to remember that this girl is using her image for a beauty contest. If i remember reading correctly. SO you cant go and blow up her eyes and all that!!! its not a nip and tuck episode!!! Doing that will hurt her compition cus she dont look that way in real life. So what do you do? What a make up artist would do, Give her a fuller looking eye with "makup" and fake eyelashes. Just make shure you edit the photo to look like somthing that can be done in real life. Learn how to pute makeup on real people. It will help when editing photos using adobe

1. gave girl what they call "smokey eye" makup on her eyes. This makes them look biger with out making a biger eye. Look up smokey eye on utube to learn how makeup artist do this
2: Fixed lens distortion, this helps bring her face into purportion better. Cameras always have some lens distortion to them
3: Fixed shadow areas on face
4: darker lipstick
5: croped image in to bring the eyes and face the main subject.
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Old 10-15-2007, 10:30 AM
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My try with this girl.

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Old 10-16-2007, 09:17 PM
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Re: critique please

I think everybody's over-done the eyes. They look like video-game-heroine eyes.

If that's what you're going for, that's cool. But if that was my sister, I'd think it was a bit over-the-top.
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Old 10-17-2007, 09:00 AM
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I think everybody's over-done the eyes. They look like video-game-heroine eyes.

If that's what you're going for, that's cool. But if that was my sister, I'd think it was a bit over-the-top.
yes, and the one thing I like to see in model's eyes are catch lights at 11am or 1pm. although that isn't always possible from the camera, the retoucher can fix that quite easily
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