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Old 11-27-2007, 06:12 AM
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Re: Critique me please.....

Converging verticals - otherwise a pretty good job.
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Old 11-27-2007, 09:14 AM
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Re: Critique me please.....

was this a shot for a client, the church etc.?

the effect of the shadow cross if cool, but if this shot was to display the church, then the shadow cross is very distracting, my eye goes right to it instead of the church name.

but if it was just an ordinary photo/art project or something, then it's fine.
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Old 11-29-2007, 02:08 PM
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Re: Critique me please.....

nice job, but I think your client is loopy. why would you want to keep a shadow that looks like a cross? I understand its a church, but from a composition standpoint, shadow of pole is very distracting, I would get rid of it.
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Old 11-29-2007, 03:20 PM
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Re: Critique me please.....

Great work

I can see why they would like the cross shadow left in being a church but i do agree with the other posters you need what is casting the shadow to be there, tough one this, any chance of posting a image with the pole back in but no cable?

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Old 11-29-2007, 03:28 PM
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or put a cross in its place
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