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Old 11-03-2007, 07:51 PM
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Beauty Retouch

I would appreciate critiques and suggestions on improvements. I removed blemishes with the healing brush and then did most of the corrections using D&B, along with correcting tones using curves.

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-Oscar
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Old 11-04-2007, 01:20 AM
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Re: Beauty Retouch

That`s a pretty nice job on the skin. Smoothed while retaining human texture.
Suggestions : Brighten her eyes a bit and remove the lace shadow on her shoulder. She has beautiful eyes, and (especially her right one) is hard to see. THe shadow on the shoulder is distracting.
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Old 11-05-2007, 09:07 AM
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Re: Beauty Retouch

docilebob,
Thanks for commenting and pointing out some areas I can work on.

-Oscar
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Old 11-13-2007, 03:01 AM
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Re: Beauty Retouch

just an idea.... darken the lace and sharpen the jewlery on her head. lighten the eye area. Lighted the highlights on her dress straps. ( a quick 3 minute ajustment just to give an idea. in no way perfect)
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