Critique - heh my first time :D

[hubiii]

hi
its not my first time retouch, but is little deep, little bit of painting face ( little cg style ) i like nimfabebeaida works and i try ;D

look :

http://images33.fotosik.pl/34/afd70a7cbd776937.jpg

[Tom K]

Hi Hubiii

I think the model is pretty, the pose is OK, and most of the photoshopping
is fine.... If I have any critical comment it is the skin color or lack of it.
I really don't know what shade it is but it looks gray to me.

Tom

[pellepiano]

I like it a lot. Im quite fond of the desaturation of the skin. Amy Dresser does it a lot.
Its only the skirt that looks somewhat more "painted" than the rest.

[hubiii]

tnx ...i change skin tone right is gray, but i will make photo blue and gray phototone with desaturation colors
... skirt im make new

today i add changes

[hubiii]

http://www.fotosik.pl/pokaz_obrazek/...97f875a5a.html
i think is better

[DJSoulglo]

the way the shadow falls on her belly, it looks like it's sticking out. That makes her look a bit fat.

Also I would rather see something of a contact shadow on the floor. I know it's not a realistic background, but she does cast a shadow, there's just no contact shadow.

[Toilet]

Good attempt for your first time. I like how you enhanced her breast. Your second copy is an improvement. Although it does look as though she's floating or she was cut and pasted in. I would use a bit of shadow to give the effect that she actually belongs there.

[hubiii]

thanks guys for tips
when i have free time ,im tune this photo
last changes
- changed color skirt and better shiny
- little changed shadows but im still working
- background is in progress

last version

http://www.fotosik.pl/pokaz_obrazek/...0ffc67ade.html