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Old 11-05-2007, 12:45 PM
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Red face Critique - heh my first time :D

hi
its not my first time retouch, but is little deep, little bit of painting face ( little cg style ) i like nimfabebeaida works and i try ;D

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Old 11-05-2007, 03:18 PM
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Hi Hubiii

I think the model is pretty, the pose is OK, and most of the photoshopping
is fine.... If I have any critical comment it is the skin color or lack of it.
I really don't know what shade it is but it looks gray to me.

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Old 11-05-2007, 03:26 PM
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Re: Critique - heh my first time :D

I like it a lot. Im quite fond of the desaturation of the skin. Amy Dresser does it a lot.
Its only the skirt that looks somewhat more "painted" than the rest.
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Old 11-06-2007, 03:56 AM
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Re: Critique - heh my first time :D

tnx ...i change skin tone right is gray, but i will make photo blue and gray phototone with desaturation colors
... skirt im make new

today i add changes
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Old 11-16-2007, 08:27 AM
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Re: Critique - heh my first time :D

http://www.fotosik.pl/pokaz_obrazek/...97f875a5a.html
i think is better
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Old 11-17-2007, 04:31 AM
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Re: Critique - heh my first time :D

the way the shadow falls on her belly, it looks like it's sticking out. That makes her look a bit fat.

Also I would rather see something of a contact shadow on the floor. I know it's not a realistic background, but she does cast a shadow, there's just no contact shadow.
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Old 11-24-2007, 08:49 AM
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Re: Critique - heh my first time :D

Good attempt for your first time. I like how you enhanced her breast. Your second copy is an improvement. Although it does look as though she's floating or she was cut and pasted in. I would use a bit of shadow to give the effect that she actually belongs there.
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Old 12-05-2007, 05:01 PM
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Re: Critique - heh my first time :D

thanks guys for tips
when i have free time ,im tune this photo
last changes
- changed color skirt and better shiny
- little changed shadows but im still working
- background is in progress

last version

http://www.fotosik.pl/pokaz_obrazek/...0ffc67ade.html
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