Critiques - - My movie poster. Critique needed

Toilet · #1 11-20-2007, 11:21 AM

Well, this is for a school project. It's a take off of the "Grizzly Park movie posters. Not as good of course

I'M iffy on it. I made a few mistakes.

Don't like the font. I'll probably change that.

Any opinions/recommendations would be totaly awesome

http://imlearning.deviantart.com/art...oster-70243437

Ant · #2 11-20-2007, 12:06 PM

I like the concept. The title doesn't read too well and I question its placement over the people. The light seems directional, then it doesn't. It's going one way then all sort of diffuses out like it doesn't have direction.

Toilet · #3 11-20-2007, 12:49 PM

Yeah. I didn't like the title either. Espeacially over the people. And good eye on the lighting. I'm going to re-do this.

Many thanks man.

jansandahl · #4 11-22-2007, 10:59 AM

The concept works, as stated. A couple of things comes to mind (imagewise, not conceptually)

- The light areas seem to be built too much with large soft brushes.
- Too much transparency showing in the construction of the image.
- The "family" is walking in daylight, and it doesn't blend well with the overall mood of the image (even if the tone is humorous). You could paint a more dramatic lighting for them.

Good luck with the remake!

Toilet · #5 11-22-2007, 02:39 PM

Yeah. This is a challenge for me. Preciate your critique

My redo. Still not complete. Nor satisfied

http://imlearning.deviantart.com/art...oster-70243437

jansandahl · #6 11-22-2007, 10:39 PM

"Don´t walk towards the light, daddy!" :-)

It´s definately an improvement! I have to dash... but I´ll be back!

DJSoulglo · #7 11-23-2007, 04:54 AM

This is going to sound silly, but the big image of the bear..... looks more like a wolf than a bear to me. It could just be me, but maybe you can make it look more bear-like.

It could just be that I'm weird.

Toilet · #8 11-24-2007, 07:32 AM

Well, not much I can really do about that. That's the bear image I worked with. Although I could change the title to Wolf Park lol.

Toilet · #9 11-25-2007, 10:16 AM

Updated version.

I darked the people to blend into the surroundings. As well as the title.

http://imlearning.deviantart.com/art...oster-70243437

jadams007 · #10 11-29-2007, 01:23 PM

just a thought, might look better with a bit of blood dripping off teeth onto the font below, then pooling and dripping off font.

oh, found this too for getting a better font: www.high-logic.com/fontcreator.html

Cklipperx · #11 01-15-2008, 10:26 AM

Hello.

I did this one and I´d like some comments about what I´ve accomplished.

Sorry about my english, by the way.

http://ribeirod.carbonmade.com/projects/62381