Critiques - - Wanted Comments

Cassidy · #1 11-24-2007, 05:43 AM

Hi, with nothing but election coverage tonight, decided to have a bit of a play this evening, any comments are welcomed

DannyRaphael · #2 11-25-2007, 12:48 PM

A couple things caught my eye that you might want to look at:
* To me parts of her hair look a touch oversharpened, but then again maybe it's my eyes
* There looks to be a bit of discoloration in her top/front teeth that was not present in the original
* I'd consider cloning out that chunk of hardware mounted on the fence (on the right -- about chin high)

These are nits, though. Excellent work on her skin and eyes.

Great pic. Did you shoot it?

Cassidy · #3 11-25-2007, 05:57 PM

With thanks Danny, this is a stock exchange pic

jadams007 · #4 11-29-2007, 01:16 PM

looks like you started with a lower res jpg image, sharpening is difficult with those types of files, but you did rather well. I do agree to get rid of the latch on the wall. also, take a look on the right, where hair meets neck, you can see shadow of pearls. seems distracting. try cloning in hair over it, i think that might help.