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Old 12-22-2007, 05:23 PM
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My latest work...

do you like it?

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Old 12-22-2007, 05:32 PM
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My latest work

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Old 12-22-2007, 06:07 PM
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Re: My latest work...

Excellent work, Michael!
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Old 12-22-2007, 06:15 PM
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Re: My latest work...

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Excellent work, Michael!
thnx Swampy!
last days, i'm looking for job only for image retouching, i home to find something soon... :P

(sorry 4 my english)
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Old 12-22-2007, 06:42 PM
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Re: My latest work...

Looks very nice but there's 2 things that bother me a little.

Her skin seems to have a cold tone, it's hard to describe but I imagine her freezing cold. You could try warming up the tone a little bit see if it looks better.

The other thing is that her skin looks a little too smooth, especially in the face. You could try giving the skin a little more texture. It's also a weird contrast because you left the two "wrinkles" under her eyes but the rest of the skin is plastic smooth.

Lastly, and this is more of a personnal taste thing. I'd soften her chin a little so she doesn't look so much like she's got a concrete jaw and give her lips slightly more volume. Right now both lips look completely straight and have the same size. You could bump the lower one a little bit.
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Old 12-22-2007, 07:21 PM
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i replaced, ok
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