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Old 01-08-2008, 01:59 PM
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Please take a look....

and say me
I´m on the right way?

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Old 01-08-2008, 02:06 PM
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Re: Please take a look....

good work hexi
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Old 01-08-2008, 02:13 PM
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Re: Please take a look....

Hi Hexi, skin looks good to me
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Old 01-09-2008, 01:23 PM
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Re: Please take a look....

2. try
how should it be
like the first
or
like 2.try

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Old 01-09-2008, 02:04 PM
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I prefer the 1st one
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Old 01-09-2008, 02:12 PM
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Re: Please take a look....

you removed the peach fuzz, but look at before and after layers on top of 1 another.

you'll notice that you shifted the highlights and shadows on her jaw line. try and maintain her natural look.
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Old 01-09-2008, 02:20 PM
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Re: Please take a look....

You're definitely the right track; just be careful not to lose too much skin texture. The shadow you have on her jaw line is looking odd in your third picture, and her cheek is seems flat. The shadow should start out severe, but begin to blend more as it gets closer to the ear. You had it right in the second photo. Also, the back highlight on the lips is looking a bit over-saturated. You might want to either ton that down or recolor it.

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Old 01-09-2008, 02:46 PM
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Wink Re: Please take a look....

ok thanks
at the next attempt I will keep my eyes on this points

many thanks
manuela
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Old 01-10-2008, 02:31 PM
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Re: Please take a look....

Here is my natural look!
What do you think?

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Old 01-15-2008, 05:14 AM
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The corner of her mouth looks really really sharp, which it wouldn't be.
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