Please take a look....

[hexi]

and say me
I´m on the right way?

thanks

[saby]

good work hexi

[amica999]

Hi Hexi, skin looks good to me

[hexi]

2. try
how should it be
like the first
or
like 2.try

thanks

[saby]

I prefer the 1st one

[KR1156]

you removed the peach fuzz, but look at before and after layers on top of 1 another.

you'll notice that you shifted the highlights and shadows on her jaw line. try and maintain her natural look.

[Maroon]

You're definitely the right track; just be careful not to lose too much skin texture. The shadow you have on her jaw line is looking odd in your third picture, and her cheek is seems flat. The shadow should start out severe, but begin to blend more as it gets closer to the ear. You had it right in the second photo. Also, the back highlight on the lips is looking a bit over-saturated. You might want to either ton that down or recolor it.

[hexi]

ok thanks
at the next attempt I will keep my eyes on this points

many thanks
manuela

[hexi]

Here is my natural look!
What do you think?

thanks

[DJSoulglo]

The corner of her mouth looks really really sharp, which it wouldn't be.