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Old 01-15-2008, 06:46 PM
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Starting with D&B (Opinions Needed)

Hello, im a graphic designer / photographer from Spain, and im new in this site. I found it really usefull and interesting (really good profesionals here). I'm starting to lear the D&B technics (i used to blur... :/) wich i learn reading here and watching Godmother's video so i need some opinions to improve my skills.

I used i picture i took time ago and retouch it with some Highlights and shadows layer.

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Old 01-15-2008, 06:56 PM
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i think this post should be on critiques, i'm sorry. if any moderator could move it i would apreciate it
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Old 01-15-2008, 07:46 PM
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Wow excellent job! I have to say that I'm quite impressed. Great detail sustained throughout, yet you still managed to get almost completely flawless skin. The only thing I can suggest is that I might minimize the appearance of the pores a little more. The high contrast in them really makes them stick out. Also, the shadow on the inside of (her) left eye is a little dark for my taste. But really, overall a fantastic job!
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Old 01-16-2008, 03:01 AM
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Re: Starting with D&B (Opinions Needed)

which video do you mean?

I agree with jam1212. Good work but a little bit too obvious.
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Old 01-16-2008, 06:43 AM
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Re: Starting with D&B (Opinions Needed)

hey, thanks for the opinions. this is the first try, ill to do an other one making it looking not so hard (talking about the pores)

i mean this video: http://www.retouchpro.com/forums/pho...y-retouch.html not a tutorial but very helpful.
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Old 01-16-2008, 08:39 AM
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Re: Starting with D&B (Opinions Needed)

Hi Edugomez,

Can you elaborate the equipment with which you shot, lighting etc... + the steps you went through to get to the retouched version. Very very impressive for starters!!!!

Thank you.

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Old 01-16-2008, 08:56 AM
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I used a D200 and Sigma 28-70 2.8 and a Quantun T5D flash.
For skin retouching i follow Godmother's video (link above, stopping it all the time) and then i just make some curves, levels, selective color layers for the general look of the image.
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Old 01-16-2008, 01:24 PM
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nice retouch. Work more on details now! the hair on the forehead could be better, on the right side there is areas with white hair that could be retouched! and some stray hair that could be cloned away to make the hair look more organized...not much left side of the forehead you have some strays and to the right of the right cheek...I also wante to see how the lips looked touched up even though her lips are a signature feature in some way!

hope you don't mind me playing with it
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Old 01-16-2008, 01:34 PM
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nice retouch. Work more on details now! the hair on the forehead could be better, on the right side there is areas with white hair that could be retouched! and some stray hair that could be cloned away to make the hair look more organized...not much left side of the forehead you have some strays and to the right of the right cheek...I also wante to see how the lips looked touched up even though her lips are a signature feature in some way!

hope you don't mind me playing with it
Yes you are right, i just play with the big issues dont pay much attention to the details in the first try. Next time, i'll go for them. About the lips, i did exactly what you do but as u say... they are like a signature.

Thanks for your opinion
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Old 01-17-2008, 09:26 AM
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Thanks buddy. That really helps.

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