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Old 01-15-2008, 06:51 PM
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Hi
I need some critiques on a recent work I did for a fashion company
here in brazil.

the photo is:
http://portfolio.arthursoares.com.br/?p=66

You can see the before/after clicking on it.

I haven't posted the original elements of the background but I've composed it from 5 diferent images.

Thanks
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Old 01-15-2008, 06:56 PM
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Re: Recent Work

the woman on the blue mattress seems to have a lost a lot of detail in her chest area...
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Old 01-15-2008, 07:29 PM
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Re: Recent Work

Thank you pixelzombie,

you're probably right,
but what about hte latest picture?
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Old 01-15-2008, 11:38 PM
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Re: Recent Work

The link sent me to a picture of a rather attractive young man No complaints about that, but you should probably link to the woman if you want me to take a look at it
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Old 01-15-2008, 11:49 PM
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Re: Recent Work

the image that comes up is pale and seems to have a green cast while viewing in firefox...
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Old 01-18-2008, 12:04 AM
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Re: Recent Work

the first image, for my taste is too saturated to have that digital lens flare, and ususally lens flares dont happen when your light source is behind the lens. otherwise good compositing job.
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